July 2015
A Movie Synopsis is simply a sketchy summary of the movie story line. It's the highlight of all the actions in the movie. It shows the most thrilling points in the movie. The aim of a movie synopsis is to get the audience's attention and make them long for the movie.

Below are tips on how to write a great movie synopsis.

(1)Begin with the main conflict.
Begin with the reason for the movie. The main conflict in the movie is the reason why it's a movie. Every movie has the Protagonist and the Antagonist. The competition between these two yields the main conflict. The first thing a reader of a synopsis wants to see is the contention between the protagonist and the antagonist.

(2)Mention the causes of the conflict. 
The next thing a reader wants to see is the reason for the conflict. ''Why is there this conflict?'', the reader would ask.

(3)Describe the key characters. 
The key characters will include the protagonist or the main character, the supporting character, the antagonist, and the dearest character to the main character. Make a little descriptions on them.

(4)Continue with the internal conflicts of the key characters. 
This includes the challenges the characters are having in winning the competition

(5)List the consequencies of either the protagonist or the antagonist not winning the competition

(6)Mention the most thrilling moment in the story. 
This will keep the attention of the reader.

(7)Do not expose the results of the competition, or the ending of the story. 
This is to keep the suspense alive.


Note: Remember a synopsis is meant to be a summary. So you need to make your descriptions and expositions brief.

Written by Winston 'Winny Greazy' Oge
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Don't let your audience easily predict the ending of your screenplay.
Don't give them a chance to start suggesting the ending of your story after seeing or reading the first scenes of the movie or screenplay respectively. Write your screenplay in a 'coded' manner, and carefully keep your ending away from your readers' mind until they finally get to it.

Below is what you can do to make the ending of your movie a secret.

(1)Create a beginning full of suspense.
Suspense will always keep the audience in an anxious mood. Before they can realize what's happening in the movie after getting over the anxiety from the suspense in the beginning, the movie would have gotten closer to its ending.

(2)Include creative subplots.
Subplot is like a branch off the main plot. The branch creates a little obstruction in the main plot. This results in a little constructive distraction in the minds of the audience; and hence consequently, an uneasy task to predict the ending.

(3)Create characters of diverse characteristics and qualities
When something has diverse qualities and characteristics, it will be hard for one to predict the next quality it will exhibit in its next action. It applies to the characters in a movie. In a particular action, they show a particular trait; in another action, another trait. This makes their way of living unpredictable. Since they actually drive the story in the movie, it will be a bit hard for the ending of the story to be predicted.

(4)Create a seeming unending suspense.
Make your suspense great and continuous. This will increase their attention, and will numb their ability to start thinking about the ending.

(5)Embed other mini themes apart from the main theme.
Themes are same as 'the message' of the story line. When you creatively deviate a bit from the main message, the audience will be a little bit distracted from perching their minds on the ending

(6)Use subplots.
Subplots are simply constructive ways of putting up dialogues that do not 'say' directly what a character is doing or about to do; rather, it 'shows' it. Subplots can help reduce the risks of making your audience start thinking about the ending.


Reasons why you should make the ending of your movie a secret to your audience

(1)Predictable endings make the whole movie uninteresting
(2)Predictable endings make the writer a cheap writer
(3)Predictable endings make the writer an amateur
(4)Predictable endings reduces the quality of the screenplay
(5)Predictable endings make the screenplay sell cheap


Written by: Winston 'Winny Greazy' Oge

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Written and Presented by:
Ogechukwu Winston Ukwuoma
OS/14B/3009
On behalf of Corps Member Welfare Group III

With regard to the headline, we shall write about corp member welfare; and we shall also ask some questions to ascertain how NYSC has actually looked into, examined carefully, and answered to the calls for a better optimized welfare of a corps member.


(A) What Welfare is all about
The Welfare of a person is the total concern for the living conditions of that person.
It is a commitment that aims at meeting the needs of a person, and consequently promotes, upgrades, and preserves their total living conditions and vitality.
The welfare of a corps member is the aid, pat, security of life, grant and allowances given to them in order to ensure their absolute ease and comfort for the twelve months they serve their fatherland.

Welfare of a person comes in different packages and dimensions, and all of these aims at achieving one thing - the wellbeing of the person.
Corps member welfare begins right at the point of mobilization for the youth service scheme. It spans to the point where the corps member officially receives their merited certificate, signs out and then automatically becomes and ex corps member.

We are proud to be corps members, and we are proud, though in all modesty that in few days time; we shall bid farewell to National Youth Service Corps and this state of Osun as well. To this end, we can confidently give an account of the degree of welfare we received throughout our stay so far.
From our experience, we can give an overview of the corp member welfare at the below locations and events:

(1)The Orientation Camp:
It cannot be argued that we were about the first batch of corps members that had fully grown roots at their places of primary assignment before the normal camping and orientation exercise. It is laudable, the decision taken by NYSC to cancel the camping exercise earlier on in order to check the spread of the rampaging EBOLA virus. It is also applaud able for the same NYSC to reschedule the camping exercise in order to let us participate and have a feel of what orientation camp is all about. Again, it is also commendable that they paid us on time to let us have some money to buy a few needs for camping showpiece. All of these are a true exhibition of corps member welfare.
But that notwithstanding, some things went wrong. Our welfare was tempered with. Not only did most of us stand in queues for the whole day waiting for bed spaces to be allocated, we also started to understand that 21 days was not 21 minutes. It was 21 days plus 21 nights. We started noticing some cases where NYSC was not treating us right. Why should NYSC allow the soldiers to push us into strenuous drills? Why should the soldiers command us to frog-jump whenever we made the slightest negligible mistakes? Why should NYSC allow the kitchen to be serving us with hot milk colored water as tea? Why didn't NYSC inspect and made sure our toilet ends were not in decay before our arrival? Why were we forced to live a so much regimented life? Why was our total welfare almost neglected?
It's all about corps member welfare and inspection, so we should be allowed to write our minds form what we have experienced.

(2)The Community Development Service (CDS):
Apart from Place of Primary Assignment (PPA), Community Development Service is another means by which we reach out to the public. The public is made up of market women, okada riders, stall owners, pupils, students, undergraduates, builders, carpenters, taxi drivers and more. We put up campaigns and proposals targeted at enlightening and providing small scale infrastructure that can better their lives. We have them at heart, and we are so obsessed about their well being and welfare.
But we that work so hard to see to the welfare of these populace, what has NYSC done to see to our own welfare in turn? Has NYSC effectively inspected the level of tremendous commitments by corps members towards the welfare of this populace? When will NYSC pay us back by improving their (NYSC) degree of consciousness about our welfare? What measures did they put in place to ensure our safety whenever we went out there to reach out to the public?

Dealing with the public especially the uncivilized and uneducated one was quite a task. We were very much vulnerable to their mischievous reactions. We were always very careful, counting our steps and being very cautious not to cross boundaries while addressing them. It’s part of our duty, but we think our welfare is not being cared for because there is no empirical guaranty of our safety.
Setting up small scale community projects communities is also part of our duties. We planned to embark on some of these projects but there were no funds. We learnt NYSC could provide a counterpart fund if we applied for it. But we also learnt that bottle neck involved in the process was much. Why should we be treated this way? What happened to the sweet promises of good welfare packages for a corps member?

(3)The Place of Primary Assignment:
We have to categorically state that the welfare of a corps member in their place of primary assignment is abysmally low. We experienced a situation at a particular period where a riot targeted at both teachers and corpers by the students was carried out. The corps members involved luckily escaped with their lives.
But we were amazed by the fact that NYSC refused to inspect the reason behind the riot despite the fact they informed about it. The riot occurred in Akinorun high school, Ikirun. The teachers and corps members were nearly stoned to death.
Why should NYSC overlook this kind of incidence? Is our safety and welfare not the most important primary assignment to them?

(4)Host Community of the Corps Member:
The host community of the corps member is where the corps member stays and lives throughout their one year service. From our experience, we found out that NYSC did not bother about where we lived. NYSC did not bother to inspect the condition of the villages and compounds we were living in. Most of us resided in communities filled with fetish cultures and evil indigenes. Most of us also were posted to very remote villages that are not close to the main town.

(5)Apartments/Housing:
We don't think the N19,800 allowance gives room to a corps member to rent an accommodation. What aids has NYSC given to this regard? From our experience, we can boldly say that welfare of a corps member when it comes to accommodation and housing is poor.

(6)The last General Elections:
Well, we can say that both NYSC and INEC did their best when it comes to the welfare of a corps member. NYSC watched over us with utter attention. Their welfare towards corps members was commendable. They ensured our safety.
But we were not properly paid. We did a lot of work, but the remuneration was simply poor.


(B) Challenges
NYSC will be in a better position to state the challenges they encounter, which consequently affects their level of concern towards the welfare of a corps member.


(C) Suggestions/Solutions
(1) NYSC should increase the allowances of a corps member
(2)NYSC should provide enough corpers' lodges in their places of primary assignment
(3)More funds from federal government should be allocated to corps members' feeding in orientation camps
(4) The populace in various communities that host corps members should be educated on the enormous need and importance of having a corps member in their midst.
(5) Security agents should be positioned and should be alert to safeguard corps members during CDS outreaches.